Hello, welcome back and fond greetings. I trust that you all had a good weekend. If you were lucky perhaps you even got some spanking in.
Sadly I didn't, but then, life is a vale of woe, or some such shit.
Anyway today I have something almost new.
A few years ago I wrote a story called "Over!" about a school girl caning. I uploaded it to the Library of Spanking Fiction, and it was one of my most popular there.
I read it again the other day, and I really rather liked it, although I recognised a couple of places where it could be improved.
Accordingly I have lightly rewritten it, and here it is in all of it's swishy glory. I think it's quite a bit better for the changes, and I hope that you all approve. I particularly like the character of the snarky narrator, who I must return to one day.
I'll talk to you again after storytime.
Over!
The
grain of the desk meandered, Amazon-like, across it's finely polished
surface. I traced it's path, my eyes glistening with unshed tears.
I'd be damned if I'd give Hurley the satisfaction of seeing me cry.
My
fingers were wrapped around the far edge of the desk, knuckles white
with the strain as I held on for dear life. Odd, that the desk was
exactly wide enough for me to do that; I wondered how all of the
other girls managed.
The
near side edge of the desk dug into my stomach, as I bent across it;
my legs were slightly trembling columns as they forced my bottom into
a perfect curve.
Sighing
I placed my cheek against the cool surface; my breasts were crushed
against my blouse as I allowed the desktop to take my weight.
Even
stretched tight as my body was I couldn't prevent an involuntary
tensing of the muscles in my bottom. They pressed against the short
tight skirt, and a pool of nervous sweat tickled the small of my back
where it formed a crater.
Damn.
I wished I'd worn a longer skirt, with a slip underneath it. As it
was the only protection I had beneath my skirt were a worryingly thin
pair of sheer black briefs, and they were already plastered against
my behind.
The
wait was eternal; here, I thought, was the absolute proof of
reincarnation, as I lived my life over and over, in the decades that
I leaned there.
I
could hear Hurley pacing the floor of her study, like an angry bull
seeking a matador. Now and again she swished her cane through the
air. It sliced through, doing terrible damage to the little oxygen
molecules that tried to dive out of it's way.
I
swallowed. Soon the hum of it's passage would be punctuated by the
crack of it's arrival. And I knew just where too.
Miss
Hurley cleared her throat; I could picture her, standing prim and
tidy, with not even a single hair out of place, as she held the cane
against her long sensible grey skirt.
Just
the type of thing I should have been wearing.
"Adamson,
I can't tell you how disappointed I am to find myself in this
position once again.” Oh yeah, it's all about you, isn't it?
“Usually when I cane a girl for bullying that it the end of the
matter. But only three weeks after the last time, here we are again.”
It
didn't seem to have occurred to her how disappointed I was to find
myself in this position once again.
"It
is particularly disappointing to find myself in the position of
having to cane an eighteen year old girl, an upper sixth former. And,
I believe, the oldest girl currently at St Grimley's.”
I
couldn't see why she felt it necessary to go through all of this
again. We'd already discussed the matter at great length. She'd told
me what had been reported to her, and I'd explained that I only gave
that daft bitch Jensen a little push; the fall, and the cut on her
head were pure accidents, caused by her being just bloody clumsy!
Always
assuming that she hadn't taken a dive just to get me into trouble.
That
had gone over about as well as the Sex Pistols at a Silver Jubilee
party. Miss Hurley looked at me as though I had hawked up a green one
on her plushly carpeted floor.
"You
know very well that we have no tolerance for bullying here at St
Grimley's School for Girls. We have a set of rules and they are
enforced strictly. I fail to understand why you thought it a good
idea to pick on that poor girl, especially so soon after our last
conversation had ended so uncomfortably for you.”
Which
meant that she whacked my arse last time, and she was about to do it
again.
"I
dislike using corporal punishment on my senior girls, but your
repellent actions, and the school rules, leave me absolutely no
option. The fact that you are legally an adult does not protect you
whilst you remain at my school.”
It
didn't bloody feel like she disliked it, not when she was lashing
that whippy bloody stick of hers across my bottom; it seemed to me
that she was well into it!
"Bullying
is an offence, not only against the poor girl that you assaulted and
terrified, but against the student body as a whole. My pupils can
only excel if they feel able to attend school without the fear of
being victimised by creatures like you.”
Oh
fine; how about the violent assault she was about to commit? How can
you teach someone that bullying is wrong by hitting them? I felt
pretty much like I was being bullied by Miss Hurley.
"This
ridiculous story that you told me, that it is somehow Jensen's fault
that you chose to viciously shove her, is nothing but a cowardly lie.
It seems that all you have learned from your previous punishment is
that it would be advisable to avoid a second one.”
Well,
yeah! Of course I didn't want to get caned again – it bloody hurt!
And anyway, it was Jensen's fault. She had made out with my
boyfriend, and that attracted a standard toll – she owed me her
lunch money for a week.
It
wasn't my fault the stroppy cow refused to hand it over, and then had
the nerve to say Anthony had come on to her. Like he'd see anything
in her stringy body!
Thinking
about it I was pretty sure that I'd showed a lot of restraint by not
ramming her teeth down her sodding throat; maybe I would have if she
hadn't bumped her head. But no, one little push and she goes down
like a dandelion in front of a lawn mower, and then rushes off to
tell the nearest teacher. And I end up bent across Hurley's desk
again.
"I
only wish I were allowed to administer more than six strokes. I am
not. In view of this I will repeat the dose, as last time. Hopefully
this time the lesson will sink in. I will not have bullying in my
school.”
Yeah,
unless you're the one doing it, you hypocritical cow!
"Adamson,
I trust that you are now ready to take your medicine?” Oh great,
now she thinks she's a bloody doctor!
I
assumed the question was rhetorical; apparently I was wrong.
"Are
you ready girl?” she snapped, thrashing the air once more. Damn,
wrong time to piss her off.
"Yes
Miss.” I lied, in my most unconvincing voice. How are you going to
be ready to get your arse beaten with a flippin' great tree trunk.
Hurley
walloped it through it through space once more.
"Very
well then. You will remain in place until I am finished.”
I
winced in anticipation as she lay the stick against my bottom; it
brushed against me where I stuck out most, and she tapped it against
me, two or three times, like a golfer addressing the ball.
You
know that old Joni Mitchell song? You don't know what you got 'til
it's gone? Well, it was like that. The absence of the cane against my
bottom was massive, as she pulled back her arm.
Sound
travels pretty fast, and I heard the swoosh of the cane falling
before I felt it's impact. There was just time for an aborted shiver
of fear before I felt a dull blow across my cheeks.
WHACK!
There
was a line of pressure, and then the cane was on it's way back
upwards. Hey, this wasn't as bad as I remembered.
The
cane had begun it's second descent (the change in noise being
unmistakeable) when the sting began to assert itself, like a line of
fire ants nibbling a straight narrow line across my behind.
I
almost made the error of looking back, to check exactly what was
happening, when a handy distraction arrived just in time.
WHACK!
This
time there was no pause before the sting took hold; it seemed to
originate deep within the muscles, rather than on the surface where
the cane had bitten me. The stroke had landed just below the first,
which was now blazing in it's own right. It almost seemed as though I
had one large wheal across my bum. Bloody hell, but she was good at
this!
WHACK!
Ah,
wow! I had been distracted by my consideration of the first two
strokes, and the third arrived unexpectedly. It exploded across the
dead centre of my bottom. I yelped, entirely without control, and
jerked my body against the desk.
I
could almost feel the extra weight of Miss Hurley's self satisfied
smile, as she took a moment to admire her handiwork.
WHACK!
Shit,
shit, shit! I no longer had time to process the effect of one
slashing blow before the next arrived; the stinging effect of one was
still flaring as the next joined it.
Ever
put your arse into a beehive? Well, me neither, but I don't need to –
I know just how it feels!
I
looked at my knuckles; the skin across them was cracking with the
effort needed to hold on. I knew that if I let go my hands would leap
to cover my bottom, and then I'd just be in more trouble.
WHACK!
This
was my life now; an eternity of burning hateful pain.
My
feet did a little uncontrolled two step in response to the latest
invasion. My bottom, without reference to the rest of me, tried to
beat a hasty retreat. This resulted in my body going into an entirely
ineffective wriggle. I must have looked like a fish struggling for
breath on the riverbank.
That
reminded me; breath! I panted. Trying to distract myself from the
universe of pain in my bottom, my mind wandered. Pregnant women did
breathing exercises to help dissipate the pain; would that help when
you were being caned?
WHACK!
Holy
shit! She really put all of herself into that one! It cut across the
other strokes, pouring a bucket of burning lava onto my poor abused
bottom.
Jesus.
She really was frighteningly good at this. I wandered where she went
to practise.
This
time I did the whole lot; gasping, panting, shuffling and jigging.
"Oh,
get up girl, and keep still, won't you? This isn't a dance
competition.”
I
obeyed half of this; I jumped to my feet and clutched at my scalded
arse with both hands, while my feet performed a quite creditable
Irish Jig.
Hurley
let me get away with this for a few seconds; I didn't care for the
smile she had all over her face whilst we watched my futile efforts
to control myself.
"Right
then, I'll just enter that in the book.” she said, reaching for the
large red volume (I bet it wasn't as red as my bottom was). She added
a line of small neat letters, and then closed it once more.
"Alright
Adamson. Compose yourself. I don't expect to see you here again;
there is no excuse for bullying. You must learn to treat others as
you yourself would wish to be treated. You may go now.”
I
turned and shuffled through her solid oak door, closing it quietly
behind me. Outside I repeated my jig, and spent a few minutes
performing a firm but gentle massage of my bruised hindquarters.
I
had P.E later, and the girls would be keen to see the damage.
Well
then, what had I learned from that experience? Two things really.
If
Miss Hurley believed that you should do unto as others as you'd want
them to do unto you, then she must be a bloody masochist!
And
when I got Jensen back, I had to be subtle about it.
Oh
yeah, I'd learned that alright.
THE
END.
Well, I hope that you enjoyed reading that as much as I did writing it; I think it's pretty decent, nice flow and entertaining characterisation.
Of course, there is just the smallest chance that I may be biased. Highly unlikely though.
The accompanying pictures were selected purely because they show adult school girls being caned. As I was feeling lazy they were all selected from one place; the really rather wonderful Institute of Discipline.
Hurry back soon.
All the best
Tim
Thanks for sharing a fun story Tim. Would love to read how she gets back at Jensen. ;)
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Cat
Hi Cat
DeleteThanks for the comment; I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I must give some thought to that, although I do have the vaguest idea of how it would go. Hmmm.
Best wishes
Tim